и смысл есть хороший[ Gunned Down By Love ]
Your peaceful eyes just like blue sky,
But your look makes me want to die.
I can't stop chaos in my mind,
Your love to me was just like wind.
I was your little funny toy,
You played with me, you just enjoyed.
But came the moment then you done,
And now you want play with next one.
I can't forget your beaty smile
It's killing me, I want to die.
I had no choose, I had no path,
And I was gunned down by love.
The only feeling what I got
It is a pain of broken heart.
And only thing what I just want
To be with you alive or not.
You was too much hostile to me,
Your peaceful eyes, where now he?
And now I see, You have no soul,
You like the life in this dead world.
Last what I saw, it is your knife,
You killed me, you took my life.
I have no future and no path,
'cause I was gunned down by love.
P. S. Как всегда не обошлость без ошибок в англ., я даже знаю каких, но без них рифма бы храмала
а как ты догадалась? 
А вообще под гитару они лучше звучат и рифма нормальная 8)
), но чтобы посылать шлюх, не обязательно своим графоманством народу мозги парить :evil: ! Понимаю - обидно, но может сменить вид творчества -"мной-тобой" это все-таки не рифма! А вообще я таким людям завидую - с завышенной самооценкой 
он воздействует на нашу психику, типа внушенает своё мнение 
